Im realized I havent lived up to my "Fantasy writer" thing so Im going to put up a small thing I have that came from a few days ago when I had a dream. The dream was so vivid and so diffrent from my other dreams that when I woke up I forced myself to write it down. So im goignt o proff read it, spruce it up, comb over a few persanal parts, and I will do this all as soon as I figure out where I put it......heh. But Im just warning you all before hand and I would like very active critasism about when I put it up, no "good job" or "Butiful work" or any of that shit, I want to feel it as you drag me through the mud.